Hmm..
Definetly better than your last.
Animation/Graphics:
The graphics were fairly bad, but the animation was good. Those are the two thing that you need to work on.
Story:
I see a story forming in this episode, but it needs to be expanded. The longer your movies are, the longer you have to expand your story ;)
Sound:
The music really suited the scene, a good example is the beach scene :P
Just make sure you try to work on those things I said :)
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