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[Ultra Sprite Tutorial]

Very nice!

A great sprite tutorial!

--Graphics/Animation--
The graphics very good for a tutorial! The text had a pixely feel to it and the Running next and back buttons were neat.
--Story/Concept--
Although sprite tutorials have been done many times, you made all th otheres look shit. :P
--Audio--
The music was very nice, it was perfectly suited with the theme of the tutorial.
--Next time--
Show how to tween your sprites.
Show different sprites in stead of just running, show jumping and attacking. Etc.
In the links, make them clickable or selectable, so we can copy and paste the links.

Overall, you done a very good job, I hope you liked my review and I hope you respond ;)

FidioProductions responds:

Thanks, mate!

About the next time things:
1. I'll think about showing people how to tween but I'm sure they already know as it's probable the most basic thing in flash... =UPDATED=

2. I don't think showing different sprites is required it's just supposed to be an example.

3. I'll update that within the next 20 minutes actually. =UPDATED=

[Dress Our King!]

Fun Dress up game!

A fun dress-up game overall, here is my review :P....

Good things:
-Nice music
-Great theme! Hail the King! SBC!
-A good selection of music
-Sweet Backgrounds
-Amazing Graphics.

You could Change:
-Make StrawberryClock Bigger, There was lots to choos from, but not much room to place the items

-The screen was a bit messy, maybe next time, make roll over menu's so it is easy access, or even add some tabs.

-Add some more cursors :P < Not Necessary, just fun to have more cursors :P

-Less songs, I found that with all that unnecessary song space taken up, the game lagged a liitle :|

Hopefully you learn alot from this review and hopefully you respond ;) I look forward to more from you.

>Review Request Club<

ThaDj responds:

Since I've already planned to create a fourth SBC for next year, I've thought of adding a "Size up/down" feature, I'll definitely add it now.

A menu making categories of items visible/invisible might be good as well.

Cursor? Never thought of that - Thanks for the idea... Yoink! :D

I explained the lag problem in the response underneath (You reviewed before I responded, so I'm not blaming you :).) The size shouldn't be affected much by the songs, as they are loops, except for the song by ParagonX9.

Thanks for the review, and to the review request club for by now four reviews, which all really helped a lot!

[MadnessAnimationTutorial]

Very nice!

A very nice tutorial! A very nice layout, the font was easy to read, and the colour of the text made the text easy on the eyes. The tutorial Explained everything very nicely, it included examples which always helps the reader. Overall, I can't wait for more from you :P

volt-light responds:

Hey, thanks!

[Being a Helpful NG'er]

Very nice!

I found this VERY helpful and everything was very well explained.

The setting out was perfect, the font was easy to read and I saw no spelling or grammar mistakes. All of the sections were on topic and all had lots of imformation for us to absorb. The music fitted in very well with the theme as the song felt very NG-ish. I found that the reviewing section was helpful for me as this is what I need improving on, I suspect it helped out many others too.
All of the links worked which is something you don't really find in many tutorials. Overall this was a very good tutorial and I hope it gets recognised.

>Review Request Club<

RohantheBarbarian responds:

Thanks a bunch for reviewing!

[flash actionscript (easy)]

Helpful

A helpful tutorial but it needs more... The buttons and the graphics were REALLY bad...try and make more tutorials, instead of 2 tutorials than beginners should already know...Try watching tutorials in the tutorial section to get ideas and help.

karionfabe responds:

thanks for the ideas,ill try to make it better next

[Newgrounds Helpful Guide]

Very nice!

This is a very fun quiz, it has a good layout and scoring system... My score was 35 :P Would have been higher but im kinda stuck in garbage :( I will reccomend to NG collcetion :)

Sispri responds:

Thanks for the recommendation.

[Angry Faic Freefall]

Hmm...

It needs lives, colourful and different faces, different levels and the enemys need to fall faster and every 5 secs or so you could increase the speed...

jazzman1302 responds:

Good idea, ill fix that and the glitch then work on something new.

[Coin Catcher 2]

Missed one imprtant thing.

Well thought-out and helpful INSTRUCTIONS!

Ratatat responds:

Authors comments.

[Battlefield Creator]

Good so far...

You could add Save and Load Buttons into the creator, but other than that the game was fine, good in fact!

CkGordon responds:

was considering a print button but went against it... in a sequal perhaps ;) . Thanks for the kind review!! -CkGordon

[MSC 3]

Good Job!

You done a VERY good job on re-living the madness games and movies with this Gadget! It felt very much like the game and you done well... I can't wait to see more from you!

AntoArts-Admin responds:

Glad you liked it buddy!